A commentary on Ecclesiastes — Edition Insights

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Thomas Pelham Dale's 1873 commentary on Ecclesiastes prioritizes the Septuagint's renderings, often dismissed as errors, and examines Hebrew roots and syntax in a verse-by-verse paraphrase-and-commentary format.
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ite this as the real result of his argument.

If, however, piety be the remedy for human ills, early piety is essential to tolerable ease and quiet in this world. This is set forth in the same paradoxical and sarcastic way as before. We are advised to avoid certain evils while we can. These are described with great pathos in Chapter XII. It is however, we believe, quite a mistake to imagine that the close of the book contains an _allegorical_ description of old age. The weakness and other trials of age are, no doubt, brought before us in very poetic and picturesque language. There is an Oriental richness and floridness about this language at first strange to Western ears; but the images employed all admit of resolution by an appeal to the usage of Scripture elsewhere, and can be shown to be quite in place. The conclusion of the whole is significantly the same as the topic at the beginning, ‘Vanity of vanities, the whole is vanity.’

The Epilogue, chapter xii. 9, follows. This has been pronounced by some to be an interpolation, the work of a later hand; but we could no more imagine a book of the Old Testament ending with such an aphorism as vanity of vanities, without doing violence to our critical instinct, than we could believe that the Gospel of St. Mark was ever intended to end with the words ‘They were afraid’ [ἐφοβοῦντο γάρ, Mark xvi. 8]. It is rather the bold, open statement of the truth, which has in a more or less covered manner formed the subject of the whole book. The aphorism, ‘Fear God and keep His commandments,’ contains the only possible solution of providential difficulties or remedy of human ills, and it is in vain to look for any other. The reasons for this mystery we must leave to God alone. He will bring into judgment――_i.e._ into adjustment or declared consistency with justice――every mystery, whether to our notions good or evil. With this assurance the book appropriately ends.

GRAMMATICAL PECULIARITIES.

The Book of Ecclesiastes being a didactic and argumentative treatise, and the only work of its kind in the Scriptures, its Hebrew is modified to meet the requirements of that which is a new philosophy, so that we may fully indorse Ewald’s expression, that ‘Koheleth uses the Hebrew language as a flexible instrument for the expression of novel ideas.’ This naturally implies a usage of words and phrases peculiar to this book, and accounts for the large number of unusual forms and once occurring words and the like which here meet us. It will be apparent to any who will diligently examine the text, that Koheleth confines himself very strictly indeed to the rules of his own grammar, and uses articles, prepositions, and tenses with an accuracy not inferior to Greek itself. For example, there is a real distinction to be discovered between the usage of masculine and feminine forms, where a substantive is of both genders. It is not a matter of indifference whether the full relative is used or the contracted form; on the contrary, it will be seen that the contracted relative gives an optative or subjunctive sense; or whether a verb governs directly or through the intervention of the particle את; a distinction which the LXX. were quite aware of, and which gave rise to their adverbial σὺν. What, for want of a better term, we have called distributive plurals――_i.e._ a singular noun and plural verb in agreement, or _vice versâ_――are exceedingly significant. They have a peculiar shade of meaning, according to circumstances and position in the sentence. It is too a matter of some consequence whether the nominative precedes or follows the verb; hence in the running translation this order is never reversed, even where our idiom requires it, but explanatory words are introduced. All these matters are, where necessary, pointed out in the notes――perhaps some may imagine pressed too far, and repeated _ad nauseam_; but the excuse must be that on these minutiæ depend the evidence of correct rendering. If thus a good sense is made out, as it were spontaneously, and which, moreover, is found to fall into place as it occurs in the context, we have strong evidence that we have hit the real meaning.

Thomas Pelham Dale's 1873 commentary on Ecclesiastes distinguishes itself by giving unusual weight to the Septuagint (LXX) translation, which he argues has been too readily dismissed as erroneous by earlier commentators. In his preface, Dale asserts that the LXX is not only the oldest translation but also the only one made while Hebrew was still a living language, making its peculiar renderings worthy of closer investigation. This editorial approach shapes the entire work, as Dale frequently revisits the LXX to challenge or refine interpretations based on the Masoretic text.

A Two-Column Reading Experience

The original print edition presented the Authorized Version on the left page and Dale's own paraphrase on the facing right page, a layout that the digital transcription preserves by placing both versions in two columns before the commentary. This structure invites the reader to compare the familiar King James wording with Dale's often more literal or explanatory rendering. For example, in his treatment of Ecclesiastes 8:11–13, Dale paraphrases "Because sentence against an evil work is not executed speedily" as "there is no speedy execution of sentence for doing evil," then unpacks the Hebrew syntax in detail. The commentary that follows each verse pair is dense with philological notes, making the book as much a reference tool as a continuous reading.

Dale's Method of Textual Emendation

Dale frequently proposes emendations to the Hebrew text based on the LXX and other ancient versions. In his analysis of Ecclesiastes 8:12, he notes that the Masoretic text reads ḥaṭṭā ("a sinning") but argues that the LXX, Symmachus, Aquila, and Theodotion all read differently, suggesting the original may have been mā‘aṭ or mē‘ēt. He reconstructs the sense as "a wickedly mistaking one does evil from the time and from the prolongation of it to HIM," a reading that ties back to the hypocritical sinners mentioned earlier. Such interventions are typical: Dale does not simply accept the received text but weighs variant readings, often concluding that the LXX preserves a more original wording. This critical stance makes the commentary valuable for students of textual criticism.

Voice and Pace in the Commentary

Dale's prose is precise and occasionally abrupt, shifting rapidly between paraphrase, grammatical analysis, and theological reflection. In the passage on Ecclesiastes 8:12–13, he moves from a literal rendering ("It amounts to this, there is nothing inflicted as a penalty of doing the evil speedily") to a parenthetical remark on the repetition of the word "evil," then to a discussion of the Hebrew root ḥṭ’. The pace is uneven: long, multi-clause sentences give way to terse observations like "a very impressive figure: the lengthened shadow of the old sinner's years." This variation mirrors the commentator's dual role as linguist and preacher, and it demands careful reading. The digital edition's standardization of punctuation and expansion of abbreviations slightly smooths Dale's original typography, but the underlying rhythm remains intact.

Readers approaching Dale's commentary should be prepared for a work that prioritizes philological detail over devotional application. The book rewards those willing to follow its intricate arguments about Hebrew roots, LXX variants, and syntactic structures. Because the excerpts cover only a portion of the commentary, the consistency of Dale's method across the entire book cannot be fully assessed, but the sample suggests a rigorous, if occasionally idiosyncratic, engagement with the text.

There’s something tender in Dale’s stubborn preference for the Septuagint’s strange phrasings—he trusted the old worn paths over the tidy ones. It reminds me of how Ecclesiastes itself keeps circling back to what’s lasting. Lately I’ve been lingering over A Harmony of the Gospels for Students of the Life of Christ Based on the Broadus Harmony in the Revised Version — Key Ideas to Explore, and the same unhurried patience seems to live there, lining up four voices side by side without smoothing their edges.

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